Hi Lynsy,

the two will love this photo in 25 years when they have to go to the office every day wearing their pinstripes Vignette and text elements work really well.

If you allow - a small piece of constructive critique. The head of the boy to the right is directly over the railing of thick planks with a very similar luminosity. Many times you cannot avoid situations like that (antenna or small trees sticking out of heads of people), many times we concentrate so much on the motif that we do not see such disturbances. I am really aware of that and it still happens to me all the time .

A simple trick to hide such problems (which in your photo is not really bad) is to select the disturbing element in post photo editing and to blur it or to de-saturate it a bit. If you sharpen the main object at the same time the contrast will even become bigger.